April 25. After Champagne [With Apologies!]
[With apologies to Emily and Greta] After Champagne, a Fizzy Feeling Comes* After champagne, a fizzy feeling comes — A closed Door opens, the mind succumbs to Joy. Its sober Angel banished for the...
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Now, that's odd. I thought there was a Yuku Censor.
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He liked what you wrote, so he gave you a break ; ) . . . .and I do too. Champagne was a much better choice imo. I love "fizzy feeling" and this is so good: The heart, released from care, takes flight...
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Oh, I really love your poem. More original. Mine's just a lark. But you inspired me!!
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A moment of clarity? A closed Door opens
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Enjoyed this. Indeed, a fizzy feeling does come immediately.
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lol, Toni. A closed Door opens, the mind succumbs to Joy. Its sober Angel banished for the night — High spirits burst forth in blazing light. reeeeeallly good.
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i'm guessing "fucked-up" is a little too grammatically correct for the censor. what about a simpler fucked up? hmmm. times are a-changing. no censor!
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Oh, and the ending.... Reading between Emily's lines....
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Amazing lack of censorship. Maybe it's like the movies - I'll never forget a famous director being fired? or just sued? for sexual harassment after challenging movie ratings, saying anything goes for...
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Not if you uncheck Smilies, though. lips lips lips !I don't think this is a censor, but some other Yuku fluke. Remember when writing lips used to get you a big graphic pair of them?
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Loved reading this Toni.Like the whole poem and the last line best.First — Chill — then Pop — then the letting go.
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Fun poem, Toni. Oh, was that"lips" that she wrote. I thought it was fuck.
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